(outside at dawn) a windy alley
Inside an important dress
He rocks happily
(cameracar) he strums on the steering wheel
Of an open car
A a bit of dark beard
(inside the house) in the shower curtain
A figure moves
(fade) while a few drops fall
On the typewriter
Above the legs
(subjective) a television on
Contorted and bizarre faces
(total) him on a bed as if surrendered
(pan) on the public waiting
Inside the smoke and sweat
And he spells out his name
He climbs the ladder
(reverse shot) and a spotlight turns on

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