Once I raised alpacas with your pet Komodo dragon
should be
Once *you* raised alpacas with your Komodo dragon
They don't know about the things that you've told me
should be
They don't know about the things that you've done to me
Achieving high elasticity
should be
Thick skins need high elasticity
Shock resistant with electricity
should be
Shock the system with electricity
You're missing the backing vocals entirely:
Take us back to where we started
Part the seas, we never parted
Flowers for the broken-hearted
Take us back to where we started
Part the seas, we never parted
Take this back to where we started

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